Assignment for Monday and Tuesday: Work on Personal Narratives. Read assignment below.
Personal Narrative is due 12/8
Scale/Rubric relating to learning goal:
4 – The student can analyze the elements of a short story come up with a valid theme (or themes) of a text and relate this theme to other texts and/or movies and real world situations. The student is able to write a personal narrative using these elements to create a text with a realistic theme that relates to the student’s life.
3 – The student can analyze elements of a short story and come up with a valid theme for a text. The student is able to write a personal narrative using some of these elements to create a text with a valid theme that relates to the student’s life.
2 – With some direction/help from the teacher the student can analyze the elements of a short story and come up with a theme for a text. With some direction/help from the teacher the student is able to write a personal narrative using some of these elements to create a text with a valid theme that relates to the student’s life.
1 – Even with help from the teacher the student is unable to analyze elements of a short story and come up with a theme for a text. Even with help from the teacher the student in unable to write a personal narrative using some of these elements to create a text with a valid theme that relates to the student’s life.
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Ideas:
Introduction to the topic. Engaging
and orienting the reader by setting out a problem or a situation. This should include a controlling idea or
suggested theme.
(W2a,
W3a)
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Topic
– controlling idea or theme is clear, and engaging. There is a problem or conflict in the
personal narrative. The controlling
idea links all sections of the narrative.
The presentation is near poetic in effect.
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Topic
– controlling idea or theme is clear and engaging.
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Topic
– controlling idea or theme is not clear, or the introduction is not
engaging. There might be no conflict
or problem or the intro. is wordy and /or rambles without getting to the
point.
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The
introduction is hard to read or to understand as far as it relates to a
central idea or theme.
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Details:
Use of narrative techniques such as dialogue, descriptions, concrete
details. This could include figurative
language (metaphor, similes, symbols, personification), use of allusions, irony,
and/or effective dialect.
(W2b,
W3b, W3c, W3d)
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Details
are effective and add depth to the narrative.
The use of strategies such as figurative language relate back to the
controlling idea or theme. Use of many
techniques or strategies.
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Details
are effective and concrete. Use of
many techniques or strategies.
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The
narrative could use more details to develop the setting, problem or the
readers understanding of the storyline.
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No
specific details. Narrative is a
collection of generalizations.
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Organization:
Use of transitions to idea with idea, sequencing of events or plot
strategies, the presentation of ideas in a logical format.
(W2c,
W2f, W3b, W3c, W3e)
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The
sequence of events and/or use of transitions to connect ideas and adds to the
text’s meaning or is innovative.
Techniques such as flashback, foreshadowing, use of parallelism, and
sentence organization (loose and/or periodic structures) might be used.
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The
sequence of events and/or use of transitions is effective.
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Narrative
is either missing transitions or the sequence of events are out of order,
illogical, or confusing as presented.
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Narrative
lacks structure or organization.
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Word
Choice/Syntax: Use of precise language, interesting word choice, SAT
vocabulary and varied syntax
(w2d,
w2e, L3)
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Impressive
and effective vocabulary. Effective
and engaging syntax. Use of high-level
vocabulary and many types of sentences and sentence lengths for effect.
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Precise
and effective language/vocabulary.
Varied syntax.
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Overuse
of “to be” verbs or repetitious language.
Syntax is not varied much.
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No
variation in syntax. Word choice is
simplistic.
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Conventions/Spelling
(L1,
L2)
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No
noticeable grammar errors
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1-3
noticeable errors, but errors do not distract from the readability of the
narrative.
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3
or more noticeable errors, or an error or errors that distract from the
readability of the narrative.
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Narrative
is plagued with grammar errors and is hard to read |